Okay, I’m putting myself on the line here again. I sat down, pushed record, and this is what I came up with.
Personally, I think the first part sounds nice… but a little two much like Irene Cara’s “What a Feeling.” Hmmm… It would definitely need some slight melody altering if I were to develop it into a full piece.
And on the second half I hit a couple funny notes. But it is un-edited improv – so I shouldn’t be too hard on it.
What do you guys think? Do the two parts have potential to be developed into full pieces?